But you still need to work on the bassline and drums. Everything still sounds a little hollow. I may not be one to talk, but I am working on it - hence no submissions, soundcloud or ng in the past 5 or so months.
Sounding good though, nearly there.
THanks for the review, feel free to elaborate on "hollow".. no idea what you mean with that.
Ima keep dropping reviews on your tunes, all i can say is this is fuckn rad!!! Glitchy, melodic, siiiick lol. One thing may be that the drums sound a little off beat every now and then, but that might just be me...?
I gotta say...
I havn't reviewed your stuff for some time now, and i'm absolutely loving the atmosphere of this!! Anyways, biggups man - long time no listen... =P
Now to listen to the rest of your stuff... haha
:) Why thank you!
Yes, go frolic, enjoy!
Duuuude, sweet tune! Sounding sooo sooo tight, reminds me heaps of 'Trolley Snatcha - We Rock The Forest' =)
Wicked tune - as always!
Buuuuut, I'd really like to see what you could do if you put more effort into drums + percussion... Your drops could be sooo much bigger, if you had huge drums =P
Groovy! Loving the sunday vibes! :P
I love the whole variation you bring in the chorus! i dont see much of it here on ng =)
I would like to see a more sudden punch in the face when it drops in tho, the effect progression between the chillout bits + chorus is lacking a little bit...
Cheers dude! Ye i'm working on it! :)
I guess thast one way to make me lose my hearing =P
Although yeah, I'll give you some hopefully helpful feedback:
- Expand the drums out a bit by adding a little reverb each to the hats, snare etc and subtly compress it to bring the reverb out.
- Add a pure sinewave bass, to give the song some sub - because there is absolutely no subbass in your song....
Theres plenty more tips i could give, but those should do for now =P
Anyhow, nice tune - youve got the basics down =)
thanks for the advice,well taken
this tunes jumpy as foooooook!!
Gotta love massive too ha! =P
Thanks man! I'm glad you like it :)
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.