thecokebitch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Fever]

Nice

But you still need to work on the bassline and drums. Everything still sounds a little hollow. I may not be one to talk, but I am working on it - hence no submissions, soundcloud or ng in the past 5 or so months.

Sounding good though, nearly there.

haywirehaywire responds:

THanks for the review, feel free to elaborate on "hollow".. no idea what you mean with that.

[dirge (dub mix)]

I gotta say...

I havn't reviewed your stuff for some time now, and i'm absolutely loving the atmosphere of this!! Anyways, biggups man - long time no listen... =P

Now to listen to the rest of your stuff... haha

oddfellowfloyd responds:

:) Why thank you!

Yes, go frolic, enjoy!

[KurdStep (RAC4 Dubstep)]

Cool Bro

I love the whole variation you bring in the chorus! i dont see much of it here on ng =)

I would like to see a more sudden punch in the face when it drops in tho, the effect progression between the chillout bits + chorus is lacking a little bit...

Anyhow,
ezzzz

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Cheers dude! Ye i'm working on it! :)

[glock drop (demo)]

NIce

Although yeah, I'll give you some hopefully helpful feedback:
- Expand the drums out a bit by adding a little reverb each to the hats, snare etc and subtly compress it to bring the reverb out.
- Add a pure sinewave bass, to give the song some sub - because there is absolutely no subbass in your song....

Theres plenty more tips i could give, but those should do for now =P

Anyhow, nice tune - youve got the basics down =)

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks for the advice,well taken

[Emergency {Dubstep}]

Nice man!

this tunes jumpy as foooooook!!
Gotta love massive too ha! =P

alextheDJ responds:

Thanks man! I'm glad you like it :)

[[oZ] ~ No. (Mellow Dubstep)]

nice...but

This tune lacks clarity, the highs are quite dull throughout and makes the whole tune sound a bit muddy... You could fix this by tighteneing up the drums, maybe?
Also, its fairly generic in terms of progression - you need to chuck sum build ups n break downs in, atm its sortv one big chorus.

Although, i must say - i like one of the synths that youve made - sounds alot like one that caspa has used in somev his tunes.

anyways,
take it ez

Blizzaine responds:

Generic? Throw in breakdowns, and choruses to make it UNgeneric? You're kidding right? Because every single dubstep song I know has breakdowns and choruses.

Talk about generic, huh?

[Paper Planes (DnB Remix)]

Fucken FILTH!

I like! V good for ng!

Keep it up!

Alexmac22347 responds:

thx

[Temperamental]

emotional ha

Yeah bro, this is sweeeeet!

broove responds:

I know.. I love this tune myself :)

[Franz Goobenheimer (dubstep)]

Bro don't diss the fruity!

Everything i make in it comes from that amazing program...

Your songs cool though, you should phatten up your drums a bit :P - layer a couple of kicks, run em through a little compression, and maybe a little distortion too. Layer the a couple more snares aswell, just to beef em up chuck sum compression on em, then run it through some nice reverb to give it some space...
And maybe chuck in some more 'random' percussion sounds, like short screams or something haha.

As for the bass, distort it some more! give it a grunge feel, then lfo a low pass filter over it! Then maybe some stereo expansion?

Effects are your friend!

Overall the tunes aiight, its aimed at the right genre! ha

peace
-josh

MaryLovesJane responds:

Oh, I'm not dissing the fruity! I love this program, but I need more to work with. If it wasn't for FLS I would be one bored son of a bitch! Thanks for the advice ^_^ I will keep it all in mind for my next attempt at the dubadub.

-Danny

[Silensay&pHDill - happy time]

Heyo

Yeah this is allright, i can seen what your aiming for...

In my opinion i think you need somesort of 'euro' pad in the background, (or two ha), and maybe switch the main melody up a bit... Gets a little repetitive over time.

Overall though, this song isnt bad!

ez
-josh

Thebigdill responds:

Thanks a lot for the review!

And the melody does change XD