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[[oZ] ~ No. (Mellow Dubstep)]

nice...but

This tune lacks clarity, the highs are quite dull throughout and makes the whole tune sound a bit muddy... You could fix this by tighteneing up the drums, maybe?
Also, its fairly generic in terms of progression - you need to chuck sum build ups n break downs in, atm its sortv one big chorus.

Although, i must say - i like one of the synths that youve made - sounds alot like one that caspa has used in somev his tunes.

anyways,
take it ez

Blizzaine responds:

Generic? Throw in breakdowns, and choruses to make it UNgeneric? You're kidding right? Because every single dubstep song I know has breakdowns and choruses.

Talk about generic, huh?

[Paper Planes (DnB Remix)]

Fucken FILTH!

I like! V good for ng!

Keep it up!

Alexmac22347 responds:

thx

[When Love Turns To Hate]

Tits are sick!!

and this song is sick, as sick as tits! =P

[Aelias - Wrapped in Dream]

mmmmmm

I like the pads and everything in the background....

But the drums are a bit too unprocesed for my taste - bitcrush'em, eq them warp them... you get the point. Make them blend with the pads n that... yeah.

ez

[Temperamental]

emotional ha

Yeah bro, this is sweeeeet!

broove responds:

I know.. I love this tune myself :)

[Pretty Fresh Ow]

seeig fuck

Fucken played this shit in my fucken low-rolling falcon bae, waz havin a fuckken meeeeang time - then the fucken gaye cops out aranui fucken rolled me for no springs.

[Dj UrOz - Project Zero Techno]

lol

brings me back to my primary school days.... year 2000 biggup hahahaha

[Para - Thor (NG CUT)]

sexxxxual

Yeah. No critisims - except wheres my 320 of this?
Would happily play this out.

[Franz Goobenheimer (dubstep)]

Bro don't diss the fruity!

Everything i make in it comes from that amazing program...

Your songs cool though, you should phatten up your drums a bit :P - layer a couple of kicks, run em through a little compression, and maybe a little distortion too. Layer the a couple more snares aswell, just to beef em up chuck sum compression on em, then run it through some nice reverb to give it some space...
And maybe chuck in some more 'random' percussion sounds, like short screams or something haha.

As for the bass, distort it some more! give it a grunge feel, then lfo a low pass filter over it! Then maybe some stereo expansion?

Effects are your friend!

Overall the tunes aiight, its aimed at the right genre! ha

peace
-josh

MaryLovesJane responds:

Oh, I'm not dissing the fruity! I love this program, but I need more to work with. If it wasn't for FLS I would be one bored son of a bitch! Thanks for the advice ^_^ I will keep it all in mind for my next attempt at the dubadub.

-Danny